Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Inside a shallow cave...

Never before had he ever felt a spiritual force quite like this one…. The soul was in such a heightened state of the perfect combination of rage and despair that his heart beat faster. Beads of sweat began to appear on his brow…. The intensity of it all resonated within his mind… it felt like rage. Such anger.

This can not be the one… his fears whispered into the darkness of his mind. Quickly wiping sweat from awe struck eyes.

Even as he thought this he knew it was true. Tasting the salty worry leaking from his pores, The Prophet continued with the incantation. His mouth spoke the necessary words even as his mind clamored over the possibilities of what could potentially happen. Why this soul? In a universe where souls are limitless and possibilities infinite, why this one? Maybe it was not for him to know. By all appearance, what he was looking at was not a savior, not the benevolent and just messiah he was expecting to see gathered in the misty fire that raged within the cave, but something tainted… something with the potential to end everything. For some though the end of time was much preferred to the current state of existence. Sometimes nothing is better than something. Was this his duty? Is this what his dreams were about? Was he supposed to begin the end of everything? It didn’t fit. All of his work just to end everything. The years he spent in seclusion… channeling the spirit, searching for clues to this one soul. Did he give up his life in search of the End? What about the Tormented? The indications that had seemed so clear were now confusing and cryptic. Were the visions merely to give him hope so he would not falter along his path?

With a mind that was always so sure of the future his doubt felt like foreign terrorists striking without mercy upon his logic. 

Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Call of the 12 Gate

 The soft tune drifted across the rocks and sand of the western desert.

The flitting female voice carried on the breeze accompanied by the sweet hint of desert flowers and distant rain.

She sat still on a large flat rock, clinging to the shadows of another larger boulder. Hardly sweating the dust didn’t change the soft texture of the skin on her bare tanned face. She licked her chapped lips and swallowed hard.

She pushed the hood back off her short thick dark hair. One would find it hard to guess her age. But she appeared a young thing, only 12 years or so.

Lighting appeared in the graying sky over the desert, she could see it striking the ground in the distance. Hot electric fingers stretching down to meet the earth. Leaving its black fingerprints in the crystal sand.

Her shadowy rock was fine for now. The sun disappeared behind darkening clouds. She would need a better shelter ...

If one were to approach the young thing you would expect to see a mother or other family close. Waiting out of sight... but no one appeared as she leapt down from her rocky perch.

She stumbled slightly as the sand shifted beneath her small body.

Cold and wet the wind blew as the storm clouds moved closer. Sand began to come to life. all over the flat desert land around her shifted and moved like waves on an ocean. The child wore long blue embroidered robes. Tugging her hood back into place she moved her palms and wrists together as if in prayer.

Her lips began to move. Soundlessly at first... Then a toneless whisper-like hiss.

Lightning and thunder cackled and cracked as if on command.

“Ol Sonf Vorsag Goho Iad Balt Lonsh
Calz Vonpho Sobra Z-Ol Ror I Ta Nazps” she chanted...

A tall man appeared suddenly silently blinking into being. Long white robes hugged his slender body. His eyes solid black. And his expression – absent, none. Black hair swirled around his shoulders as the desert wind grew faster - more violent. But the figure stood, unblinking, not making a move or even a breath.

“Qaa Nothoa Zimz Od Commah
a Nobloh Zien Soba Thil Gnonp Prge”

Another figure, same height, same build, slender and feminine. White robes churning in the strong wind. Short, blonde hair, black eyes, no movement, no breath...

“Aldi Ds Vrbs Obleh G Rsam
Casarm Ohorela Taba Pir Ds Zonrensg
Cab Erm Iadnah Pilah Farzm”

One by one she called them... the unborn. The all seeing eyeless. The lifeless immortals. Each different... all the same...

She was surrounded now, 12 figures stood around her in a perfect circle. 9 feet in diameter. The sand began to circle as if to form a sinkhole beneath them all.

But the figures stood unmoved.

The storm was on them now. Over and all around the rain began to fall in sparse torrents. Turning the dusty sand to mud. She shouted now to the figures who immediately became aware of her presence and listened...

“Ca Od Zamran  Odo Cicle
Be friendly unto me - For I am The servant of the same
Qaa Zorge Lap Zirdo Noco 
Your God, The true worshipper of The Highest.
Mad Hoath Iaida!”


Lightening shot down from the sky. Striking each of the figures on the crown of their head. Shooting down through their bodies and exploding the sand at their feet. It stayed. Not a single strike, but a flow...

Electricity was pouring down from the clouds in hot white veins through the white robed figures. Who never moved, never shifted, did not feel, and stayed like statues unafflicted.

The sand began to fill the electrified air –suspended, black from heat it formed a massive tunnel to the heavens. The young girl stood in the center of the electric vortex. Swaying gently from the force, she closed her eyes...


The next moment – gone. Empty. No lightening... though the clouds still hung heavy over the barren land. The winds softened and became silent. Only the boulder sat unmoved, the landscape unchanged – save the large symbols burned into the sand. Surrounding a charred black spiral.

Friday, November 7, 2008

Plot Synopsis

Gravity is "accidentally" unleashed from the chaos realm by the illuminati with the mysterious help of Prophet X. The process of crossing throught the realms as well as the manipulations by the illuminati twist Gravity's spirit into something terrible. They lock the young spirit of Gravity up in a facility for research and testing to figure out exactly who and what he is. 

The Spiritual Scientists spend years trying to discover everything they can about the anomoly that is Gravity before he finally escapes in a fit of explosive rage. During the escape he unwittingly rescues Skye... who is a prisoner of the illuminati being probed for information on her own lineage and source of power.

Skye runs into Prophet X while escaping who she knows from past dealings with the mystic and he explains about the prophecies surrounding Gravity and the Ragewalkers path. They split up in their search of Gravity who seems to have dissapeared entirely.

Each have their motives for finding the ragewalker. Everything Prophet X does and why he does it is a mystery and wants Gravity to ensure that prophecy is fulfilled... benevolent goals that take a turn for the worst.

Skye was entrigued by the man she saw during her rescue... she looked into the eyes of chaos... and saw humanity there. Prophet talked about him as if he were a monster... and an object with no real emotion or sentience... no will to live and just another form of twisted soul.. but with a touch destiny. She saw something different... she did not see the object Prophet saw... she saw a real soul in torment and terror and he saved her life.... saved not only her life but the lives of her entire tribe... if the illuminati would have been able to get the information and power she has knowledge of her people would have been tortured and murdered. She just wants to say.... thank you.

So they are both in search of this strange man... and both for different reasons. They are in a race against the illuminati to find the one man that may be able save the world... or forever lock it in the chaos realm. 

Gravity, having escaped the clutches of the illuminati... runs blindly across a twisted realm. Uncertain of everything... how he came to be, how the world works, what exactly he is, and why he is so different than the people he comes across. His trek across the land is a depressing one... with no knowlege of himself or the world he see's not to mention the monstrosity the illuminati has made of him, he finds adversity at every corner of the world. being one part twisted soul and another part ragewalker neiter of which he has in depth knowlege of... the people fear him, distrust him, and some down right hate him for what he is. Alone he travels. learning as he goes... inadvertantly destroying things with the dormant power of his kind... something guides him, he begins to understand that his path is no longer random as he runs into similar secrets of the past where ever he goes. relics that he on some level understands... even though that seems impossible as he can't remember his name. 

The illuminati find a solution to their problem... there is a dual prophetic timeline for the creature Gravity. They can call upon the "what if" dimention that outlines the events of Gravity's life had his soul not been pulled from the chaos realm. The illuminati create human weapons to find the one weapon that escaped. the souls of his children are summoned... and unlike their father there was no escape... they are completely the twisted souls the illuminati need them to be to track the strange soul form prophecized to bring an end to their tyranny.









Wednesday, November 5, 2008

Story Log Line

The world is in turmoil. The hand of the illuminati now covers nearly all of the known world. They seek control... and they have it... they control the land... the wealth... the military power... and are seeking to control the very souls of the people that live in this world of fear. Prophet X a rogue mystic with a mysterious agenda free's a being from the Chaos realm... this being is both the destroyer and final hope for an existance that is falling apart at the very seams of reality. Gravity... a being of chaos is the Last Ragewalker... his blood is of a lineage that was destroyed by the illuminati hundreds of years before the global shift in consciousness. A small band of dedicated rogues seek out the ragewalker in an attempt to thwart the advances of the illuminati's spiritual manipulations. Not knowing whether or not Gravity will save the world or destroy it... they fight to bring about a change in the fabric of reality... to fix the veil before it destroys everything. Having no choice but to follow the tortured heart of the mysterious chaos man... Gravity finds himself in a battle for his own morality, and reasons to love himself as well as those that hate and fear him.